Module 09 of 11
Write Words That Work
Headlines that survive a scroll, calls-to-action that people actually click, and a blog structure you can reuse without it showing.
Learning objectives
By the end of this module you will be able to:
- Rewrite a weak headline into one that makes a specific promise.
- Write a call-to-action that says what happens next rather than issuing an order.
- Adjust tone for the channel without abandoning your voice.
- Structure a blog post so that someone who reads only the headings still gets the point.
Lesson
Copywriting is not decorative writing. It is the practical business of getting one specific idea into somebody’s head while they are busy, distracted and inclined to leave. Everything in this module is a way of respecting that.
Headlines: specific beats clever, always
A headline has one job: make the next line worth reading. It does that by being specific enough that the reader can tell whether it concerns them. Vagueness is the failure mode, and cleverness is vagueness wearing a good coat.
- Say what the reader gets, not what you did. "We rebuilt our booking system" is your news; "Book a repair in thirty seconds" is theirs.
- Prefer a concrete noun and a real number to an adjective. "Faster" means nothing; "loads in under a second on 4G" means something.
- Front-load the words that matter — people read the first three or four and decide.
- If the headline could sit on a competitor’s page unchanged, it is not a headline, it is a category label.
Calls-to-action: describe the next moment
A call-to-action fails when it asks for a commitment the reader has not yet agreed to, or when it hides what happens after the click. "Submit" describes your database. "Get the quote" describes their next five minutes.
- Use the reader’s verb for the outcome: get, see, start, book, download, read.
- Say what happens next when it is not obvious — whether a call follows, whether payment is involved, how long it takes.
- One primary action per screen. A second, equally weighted button halves the effect of the first.
- Remove the risk in the words next to the button, not in the button itself: no card needed, unsubscribe any time, we reply within a day.
- Do not manufacture urgency you cannot justify. A fake deadline works once and costs you the next thing you say.
Tone changes by channel; voice does not
Voice is how you sound — the vocabulary, the level of formality, whether you make jokes, how much you hedge. It should be the same everywhere, because it is the thing people recognise. Tone is the register you use for a particular moment, and it moves.
- A landing page is patient and specific: the reader chose to be there and will read if you give them a reason.
- An email is one-to-one. Write as though to a single named person, because that is how it is read.
- A social post has one idea and no preamble. If it needs a run-up, it is an article.
- A documentation page is plain to the point of boring, because someone is reading it while something is broken.
- An error message is short, honest, and tells the person what to do — the highest-stakes copy on any site, and the least often written on purpose.
A blog structure you can reuse
Most useful posts share the same skeleton. Reusing it is not formulaic if the content underneath is real — it is the same reason buildings have load-bearing walls in similar places.
- The problem, stated as the reader would state it, in the first two sentences.
- Why the obvious approach falls short — this is what earns you the rest of the post.
- The approach you are proposing, named clearly enough to be remembered.
- How it works, in steps or sections, with a concrete example in each.
- What it costs — the trade-off, the caveat, the case where it does not apply. Omitting this is how posts lose credibility.
- What to do next, once, without a list of alternatives.
Write the headings first and read them on their own. If that sequence alone tells a coherent story, the post will survive being skimmed — which is how most of it will actually be read.
Assignment
Rewrite one page you already published
Take a real page of your own — a project page, a service description, a README. Do not write anything new; rewrite what is there.
- Rewrite the headline so it fails the swap test — so that putting a competitor’s name in makes it untrue.
- Rewrite the primary call-to-action so it describes the reader’s next five minutes, and add one line beside it that removes a risk.
- Rewrite the headings so that reading only the headings tells the whole story.
- Cut ten per cent of the words without losing anything. There is always ten per cent.
Format the result as a graphic in Canva if it is going anywhere social — the design work from Module 4 applies directly.
Deliverable
The before and after of the headline and CTA, the new heading sequence, and the word count before and after.
Quiz
Which headline is doing the most work?
Here is a weak headline: "Professional web development services tailored to your needs." Rewrite it so that it fails the swap test — so that putting a competitor’s name in front of it would make it untrue.
Name the specific thing you do, for the specific person, with a number or a concrete outcome in it.
Which of these are sound call-to-action practice?
Select every answer that applies.
True or false: "Submit" is a reasonable default label for a form button, because everyone understands it.
Match each channel to the register that suits it.
Pick the matching item for each row.
- A landing page for a service
- A message to your mailing list
- A post in a social feed
- The text shown when something has failed
Put the reusable blog post structure into its working order.
Put the steps in the right order.
- 1Work through how it goes, with a concrete example at each step
- 2State the problem as the reader would state it
- 3State the trade-off and where it does not apply
- 4Give one next action
- 5Name the approach you are proposing
- 6Show why the obvious approach falls short
Describe your own writing voice in three adjectives, then find a paragraph you published that does not match them. What would you change?
Score: 0 / 5
Recap
Before you move on, the things worth keeping:
- A headline earns the next line by being specific enough that the reader knows whether it concerns them.
- The swap test: if a competitor’s name fits your headline unchanged, you wrote a category label.
- A call-to-action describes the reader’s next moment, keeps one primary action per screen, and removes risk in the words beside the button.
- Voice stays constant; tone moves by channel. Error messages are the highest-stakes copy and the least deliberately written.
- Reuse the post skeleton — problem, why the obvious fails, the approach, how it works, the trade-off, one next action — and write the headings first.